The critical question that I chose was “How
does the use of modern technology affect its society?” After class today I have
been thinking about revising it to something different but I am not completely
sure. After talking with a writing consultant and the activities in class today
I am more confident in my Critical Question.
For now I am planning to keep it the same. My question fits well into
all of the categories. My question is
personally meaningful because I have been thinking and having a lot of ironic
happenings with technology lately and how it is affecting us. Technology is affecting our whole society and
that is evident in our everyday lives.
Some sub questions that I could ask from the main point are if these
changes are for bad or good and what are some advantages and
disadvantages. Modern technology is sort
of a broad topic but once I narrow it down to cell phones and interaction in my
paper it wont be as broad. Technology
has affected us negatively and positively over the ages so this is not an
opinionated question. I want to explore
one side of this though. Technology is
such an interesting topic that I will definitely be able to explore it through
three different projects.
Artifact:
Cell phones
Television
Ipod
Music
Social media
Twitter
Texting
Apps
Teenagers
Calling
The artifact that I am probably
going to use is cell phone. For all of
these prompts and blog questions my mind and writing seems to come back to cell
phones. There are so many directions that I could take this paper and I am
excited about that. I work best when I
know the material and have examples to connect it back to. Every time I look around the room I notice
cell phones first. Before I came to
college I was having major cell phone problems.
I could not go two minutes without wanting to check my phone or have a
thought about who might be texting me.
Now that college has started, I have found that I barely have five
minutes to look at social media during the day.
My thoughts have completely changed since I no longer use my phone as
much. When I see others using their phone
constantly, it annoys me and I finally see how pointless it is. Before this week though I thought it was a
necessity to check social media. I was so caught up in myself I would forget to
notice others around me and interact appropriately. In today’s society, everywhere you look there are people using their phones. It has become a way to escape awkwardness and
social interaction. An example would be
at a restaurant or social gathering. My
favorite is when you walk by someone and quickly turn to a cell phone to avoid
eye contact and awkwardness instead of just saying “hello.”g Even in pre-teenagers I have noticed some
changes. They hide behind their cellphone
to text a crush or girl they are afraid to talk to. Bullying is often started on social media
because it helps people avoid human contact. There are so many topics I could
explore with the cell phone artifact and through my “so
what” point, I hope to give readers a different perspective on how to
change their cell phone use to better our society.
You seem genuinely intereseted in this topic of technology. My concern, though, is that your question is still very broad. Technology means more than just phones and computers. Technology is any tool humans imvent and use. I think it might help to narrow your question down in terms of context or specific type of technology, if this is something you're really interested in.
ReplyDeleteSimillarly, in terms of your artifact I'm concerned it might be setting you up for some cliche writing. I'm wondering how you will be able to use this artifact as something to tell stories around. What about choosing an artifact that is even releated to phones, like the Twitter or facebook or Instagram logo I think it might help to think even more concretely but in a way that is not so directly linked to "technology."