Monday, July 6, 2015

Blog #7 Recipe


Analyzing Your Model Text: Maddie Simon

1.    What modes does your text make use of?

 The modes in the model texts (blogs) I used include text, dialogue, pictures, and web design.
2.     Audience
a.    Who, very specifically, is the audience for your text? NOTE: It might be worth considering if you think you fall into the author’s intended target audience for the text. If not, what are the differences between how you might read/perceive the text and how the target audience might?

 The audience for these blogs are young-adult, social media users.  Also the specific blog focused on helping entrepreneurs and small business owners to help them increase their credibility and popularity within their social media following and marketing. And the other was just a popular informational blog designed to entertain young adults.
b.     How does the author use pronouns like “you,” “we,” and “us?” When the author uses these pronouns who is he/she specifically referring to? How do these pronouns affect the way the author is constructing an audience? 
The author is referring to their specific audience and makes them feel welcome in reading the information.  The author is trying to gain respect and understand the audience by using “we” and “us.”
c.     How does the author construct a relationship between themselves and their audience? The author constructs a relationship with their audience by describing similar interests and experiences through their writing and by using certain pronouns.
d.     What words or phrases stand out and let you know how the author is imagining their audience?  

This specific quote relates to their audience and engages them through questions and pronouns.  Keeping the reader thinking and engaged is a good way to relate to them and keep them coming back to the blog.
“ask yourself:
-how does this image support my goals?
-how will it convert?
-Who will care about it?
-How will it make my audience feel?”

3.     Authorial Identity:
a.     How does the author construct his/her own identity in relationship to the reader?   

Sometime they use “I” but rarely.  The author of this blog likes to engage the reader constantly by saying “we.”  She only uses “me” to give an example of her past experience or knowledge of the topic.  I think she limits her use of those words though to not distract the reader from thinking the blog is about the author.  The reader wants help, not to hear about someone else.  Keep focus on the reader and helping them.
b.     Does the author use “I” or “me”? Why? And how does this affect  their relationship with their audience?
4.     Purpose:
·       What is the author’s purpose in writing? What is the author hoping to accomplish in the world with their text? How do they want people to feel, think, or act differently as a result of their text? 
The authors purpose is to help her readers build a sustainable social media strategy that is comprehensive, effective, and produces remarkable results.

Find the sentence or two where the author first gives the indication of their argument and highlight it. Where does this fall in the text
a.     Find the sentence where the author most clearly states their purpose or argument? Where, within the text is this?
The key is a well thought out digital marketing strategy that’s targeted and concise. It connects your business with the exact right people, putting you in a position of trust and authority. Whether you’re a small business, entrepreneur or brand, now is the time to define your online identity. I work with companies and global brands across multiple verticals. The goal is always the same: create manageable, measurable and explosive results. This statement is located in a section labeled “Work with me” some of the other titles are called, “consulting”, “training”, “blog”.

5.     Does the author make use of outside research or secondary sources? If so, how and where?
She quotes other credible authors and businesses that have used her strategies and have become successful. The other blog used many different genres such as sports, fashion, and entertainment as outside research sources.
6.     Organization:
a.     How does the author organize the text? How does he transition from idea to idea?  
The author uses blog posts to organize her ideas.  Each one is split up in its own bubble with a title, short description, date, then the actual blog post, sources, and social media links.
b.     What kinds of words or language does the author use to connect his or her ideas together?
Since each post has its own title and different idea, there isn’t any words that specifically connect each one together.  The different blog posts might be similar in some regard to center the focus of the whole blog.  Since every blog is different there isn’t anything that specifically connects each post but they all have the same idea.  With my blog, none of the posts will have the same wording but will have the same idea in mind. 

7.     Genre:
a.     How would you define or name the genre of your text. Remember, a genre is a type of thing that reoccurs, has conventions, and uses those conventions to convey meaning.
The genre of my text is an persuasive blog and an entertainment blog.
b.    What are the conventions of this genre?
The conventions in the blog include the title, heading, text, pictures, color, and background.. etc that are included in the blog posts.

8.    Images
a.    How did the author use still images (photos or drawings) in the text? The author of the blog used a lot of pictures in each title of the posts.  This would persuade the reader into wanting to know more if there was an interesting picture.
b.    What work are these images doing to help the author accomplish his purpose?  The pictures add to the visual idea for the reader.  I was persuaded to click on certain posts if the picture was intriguing.
c.     Are they photos, drawings, charts, graphs, etc.? photos and a few charts to show statistics.
d.    Why might the author do this?  The charts would also add to visual effect so that the reader would be drawn to believing the facts and wanting to know more.
e.    How do these images work with the text or spoken speech around them? The images complement the blog posts.

9.    Document Design and Layout:
a.    What  font did they choose to use and why?  The blogs use a large, clear, and easy to read text.
b.    How did they make use of headings, titles, bold font, or italics? Why do you think they did this?  The headings are larger than the rest of the writing.  This is done to cath the readers attention for each new post.  The bold font is used for important words and phrases throughout the writing and is done so the reader will remember those certain facts.  Italics are used for certain words that might have an alternative meaning, but the blogs I used for model texts don’t use italics.
c.     How is the text laid out on the page? In columns? Large blocks of text? Short paragraphs? Long paragraphs? Is it wrapped around images?  The text is designed in large blocks of text normally with a box around it.  Once you click on each box the full article pops up.  The blocks of texts are split up between pictures and quotes.
d.    How does the text make use of color? What colors  does the text use and why?   The colors of this blog are orange and white.  This color is unlike any specific social media site so its not biased.  It is bright and simple.
e.    What other visual elements does the text use to help convey it’s ideas? Tables? “Pull quotes”? etc. There are adds on the side and also social media icons to click on to go directly to the blog authors sites.
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Recipe for making a blog

Instructions for making a blog (centered around young adult social media users)
The ingredients for a blog include certain text, pictures, links, and quotes that need to be included in each post.

First you must create a blog online. This was done by selecting a template which was designed similarly to the my two model texts. Next I gave my blog a title and started editing the font and color background of the whole page.  Next I added blog posts.  Each one was different and some were just pictures and some were only writing.  No matter what type, they all need a title and some type of information that will make the reader want to click on the link and read the actual article.  I also included links in some posts to make it interactive.  Videos were helpful too to include in posts to add a variety of modes.  Lastly I put the finishing touches on the design to make everything look formal and organized.  I tried to keep it simple so it wasn’t overwhelming to look at.  The color, fonts, and other conventions were important to make the blog look professional.  Finally, I saved and submitted my work to create a website where people can go and look!







      










Wednesday, July 1, 2015

Blog #6 Revised Proposal

My original critical question is, ‘How has our societies cell phone and social media use affected the way we interact and communicate?’
 A new sub-question that I might want to address is “How can young adults adjust to a culture where cell phones have taken over our lives?” and “what are ways we can overcome social media addiction?” 
The purpose of this project is to better inform  students and young adults of their cell phone/social media use and how to overcome their ‘addiction’ and overuse problems in a fun and entertaining way. 
I want the texts to be informative in ways that people can take away valuable information and change their bad habits after viewing my project.
The main users of social media are young adults and high school and college students.  I want my audience to be young adult social media and technology savvy users.   Both genders, religion, race, etc.  Any student and young adult with connections to technology.
The genre that I have been brainstorming about is an informative blog/publication sort of like a Tumblr or fun blog.  The modes I am hoping to use include
·      blog posts such as articles and opinion pieces/interview/survey/things to do without your phone/pledge to not using phone or limited phone use/
·      video links from youtube about phones being distracting
·      music?
·      Images
·      Text
·      Blog design
·      Tweet links
·      Tools to avoid social media addiction

I think that I have a pretty good sense of understanding for this project.  I want it to be an informative blog that students can search. Ironically it will be online, but I think that will be the easiest way for students to access it.  Some titles I am thinking for the blog include:  ‘Pay attention to your self, not your selfies’ or  ‘Rehab for social media’ ‘antisocial media’ I want it to be information but at the same time funny. 
 clearly this is a website about not using phone but need to reach audience in any way we can.  awkwardness, putting phones on table could be blog entry examples or addiction (30 minute internet rule)


Some ideas as model texts would be blogs such as :Wix, Weebly, Tumblr, or pinterest pages.  I would model the design of a fitness or fashion blog to see how they include their social media and contact information.